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Peachy
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Most of my poems try to be inspirational and it is only when I am imspired by something that I can sit down and write :)  Nothing comes from just off the top of my head ... has to come from feelings way down deep!! BUT I have read so many dark poetry poems that I would like to give it a try .... these are for those that like to share their dark sides ..... cause we KNOW we all have one!! :) Hope ya enjoy xxx

January 21, 2011 at 1:41 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Peachy
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The Dark End

 

Listen.......For a Dark End whispered on the wind

 

Awake in nightmarish torture

Blinding pain my soul does nurture

 

Starlight's glow alights my tear

Longing for a lover no longer here

 

A sigh with tangible sorrow

No Light No Hope upon tomorrow

 

An anguished heart never to be unleashed

For a destiny fading quickly from it's beseeched

 

Shadows draw a puzzled query

Hidden demons seethe there with fury

 

In the distance hear the hell hounds bay

Wrecking havoc til the light day

 

Blood red roses crushed under foot

Leaving me hollow, insides black as soot

 

Because of the dream always just out of  our reaches

what a hardened wisdom failure  teaches

 

Let the Dark End begin.....

 



 


 





 

January 21, 2011 at 1:42 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Peachy
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Lost Love


You came into my life

As quickly as you left.

You grabbed a cutting knife

And sliced right through my breast.

 

My heart now cut in two

It feels beyond repair.

my sky no longer blue

God, life just isn't fair.

 

So here we are, just friends,

I long for nothing more

Saddness with no end

chilling to my core.

 

Darkened clouds, wind and rain.

Left alone with all this pain

Dark saddened eyes, blurring with tears.

Futures crumble when doubt appears.

 

With me left here still thinking

What was false, what was true

So alone and perplexed

I’m left with No clue!

January 21, 2011 at 1:45 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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Peachy, I implore

more darkness of yours

the Dark End was great

must be more to relate

and I want to hear it!

 

 

kitkas

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January 21, 2011 at 1:49 PM Flag Quote & Reply

toxic_noir
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ooooooh luv the poems peachy :P darkside is a brill side to write from :)

January 30, 2011 at 5:05 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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coded message i sent that i hoped you would decode

cos I was bored and fascinated with the words you spoke

whatever I said I really don't care

Only sorry we're not talking cos pain is fun to share

I won't speak first but maybe you'd like to explain

why you suddenly changed

I didn't alter I'm still the same

 

February 13, 2011 at 12:36 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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There's cyanide in the roses and the water shades of grey,

That I'm not a healthy deity, I think that it's a shame,

The darkness is a cloak I where when I am bored and no-one's there,

It's cotton wool and warmth to hide when I grew up and hormones died.

February 20, 2011 at 1:03 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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wear*

February 20, 2011 at 1:23 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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Tar my lungs,
I don't care,
don't need love,
don't need air.
I'm so bored,
so adored,
waking up is such a chore. 
Maybe we can play a game,
called ""I'll stay here, you go away".
Call out for help,
then turn it away,
decide to get clean,
then shoot up all day

February 23, 2011 at 8:22 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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WOW!

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February 26, 2011 at 3:13 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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thank you Bogfather

March 2, 2011 at 2:20 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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the past is a pain that I try to forget
So I'm drinking more and thinking less
A good friend is hard to find
She said "tell me all your secrets and I'll tell you most of mine"

With words conspiratorial
She stole my heart away
I like the words you say

Pole to pole in the blink of an eye,
Meet me in the middle where we'll gently collide,
Secrets will keep us so we'll never be apart,
She said "let's go somewhere because you've stolen my heart."

Cupid and his arrows,
They stole our hearts away,
I like the words you say

March 11, 2011 at 11:57 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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Simple Mind - you're simply class!

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March 17, 2011 at 3:45 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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thanks for your comments :)  most of mine are lyrical poetry from my songs.  Glad you enjoy them and thanks again for the supporting comments.

Alex

March 17, 2011 at 11:20 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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keep them coming Alex, and i hope you enjoy my stuff too! new stuff (and very new stuff!) in 'wintawarmers'

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March 17, 2011 at 11:22 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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Somnolescene

Poppy mornings,Summer in my mind, I will stay by your side,
Poppy mornings, pupils downsized, I will sleep when I die.

I'm sweating in the winter, I'm shivering in June,
The birds outside my window are singing out of tune,
I'm yawning in the morning, moves flowers in full bloom,
The stars upon my ceiling, they make me think of you.

Poppy mornings, in the Summer time,
I will breathe in your lies,
Always falling, underr Summer skies,
But I'll stay by your side.
Poppy mornings, Summer in my mind,
I will stay by your side.
Poppy mornings, pupil's downsized,
I will sleep when I die.

The stars upon my ceiling make me think of you.

To hear to song, check out our bands myspace if it's cool to post: www.myspace.com/MagneticLights .  just uploaded a new version

March 27, 2011 at 2:49 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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cool song - if a bit too nirvana, but well done - keep posting and let us know when there's more to hear too!

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March 28, 2011 at 12:17 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Simple Mind
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A bit Nirvana? :o lol.  It's well a bit too mellow to be like them.  It;s just part of our sound :)

March 31, 2011 at 6:33 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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