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kim
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i'm askin' - lol

ummmmm . . . drawn curtains????

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love is falling into love

March 18, 2009 at 5:13 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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...sat between two curtain makers at a 'do' on tuesday!

 

'virtuosity' is done x

March 20, 2009 at 4:30 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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as is 'shh!' for kim (and whisper?) lol

March 20, 2009 at 9:29 AM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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shhhh! a silence, a windsough

is it nae enough

tat i should call fer maer

i do forebare

that my turn in ample

matters of example

fear a u-turn in ability -

my space in humility

favours you a curtsy

whilst my tongue be thisty

fer yet maer werds of thee

te alight me significantly

 

thank you trevor fer all those wonderful poems in beware :) 

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love is falling into love

March 20, 2009 at 10:05 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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kim...sensual pride - all awaiting, all yours x

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TheBogfather...x

March 20, 2009 at 1:34 PM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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trev  . . .   that was brilliant  . . .  that was  . . . 

sensational - emotional - musically conscious -

you even remembered the lambada -

one of my favourites :) 

 

i so admire you

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love is falling into love

March 20, 2009 at 4:20 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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I'm so happy you liked it - twas a bit of a challenge without getting either 'too saucy' or losing the rhythm! there may be a part two in the pipeline when the mood takes, shall we say! keep the suggestions coming, luv Trev x

March 21, 2009 at 7:31 AM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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nothing is too saucy or raunchy, as lang it be sensuous.

when it becomes licencious, then it is uninteresting -

you have the knack te keep the subject clanderstine,

which can be so emotionally affirmative

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love is falling into love

March 21, 2009 at 7:53 AM Flag Quote & Reply

FrannieB
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thebogfather at 04:30AM on Mar 20, 2009

...sat between two curtain makers at a 'do' on tuesday!

 

'virtuosity' is done x

Boggy,

This great! Being at the same 'do', it really carries a flavour of what these two were like.

You are brill' Bro'.

 

Must find some way to get some of these published and a bit more 'out there'. Of course you could make some money too!

 

Re  Chelsea - his Dad's friend Dave is an Arsenal fan and always trying to convert him if that helps?

 

Hugs' n' stuff!

FrannieB

March 22, 2009 at 4:20 AM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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hello frannie :) 

 

 

when swallows return

an' coos the lenitive dove

ye ken summer's fern

will make a bed fer love

 

when love comes

the werld is filled wi' light

werds begin te fumble

wi' "let's make love tonight"

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love is falling into love

March 22, 2009 at 4:47 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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Kim!! behave!!! lol!!!

March 22, 2009 at 8:53 AM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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now who said i was out o' line . . . . lol ???

i have my teeth an' tongue ranine

i only wish te state wherewith

whence love takes its sensely path   :) 

 

miss behaving :) 

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love is falling into love

March 22, 2009 at 11:35 AM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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whose love, whose tongue

are ye wanting among

which path or aftermath

is miss behaving, craving?

 

lol x

March 22, 2009 at 12:31 PM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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the tongue of love be well moist

celebrated an' rejoyced

follow down this lovers' lane

ye'll find the craving once again

am i craving . . . am i in need?

we all wish our love te succeed :) 

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love is falling into love

March 22, 2009 at 1:00 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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the piano player awaits...

March 22, 2009 at 1:15 PM Flag Quote & Reply

kim
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thank you daddy,

i played the piano whilst reading that -

i think i may have composed a masterpiece,

but ifear i shall ferget it now . . . lest i play it again -

all in all, it was a tribute tae thee :)

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love is falling into love

March 22, 2009 at 2:07 PM Flag Quote & Reply

thebogfather
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I beg you record it and send!

March 22, 2009 at 2:45 PM Flag Quote & Reply

whisper
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trev you always iggy me! :D x i asked for a poem about shopping with a bad headache, am waiting! :P x xxx

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 Whisper xxx 

March 23, 2009 at 6:32 AM Flag Quote & Reply

whisper
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you will be glad to know i've written another poem lol :D xxx

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 Whisper xxx 

March 23, 2009 at 6:39 AM Flag Quote & Reply

whisper
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rats! trev where it says 'pause to partake in a passionate kiss'

 can you do it so that it's like this...

 

pause to partake

in a passionate kiss

 

 thanx xxx

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 Whisper xxx 

March 23, 2009 at 6:59 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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